'This is really good but next time you should use the same fonts throughout to create continuity. I like the variety of stories it includes as it makes it interesting to the reader and they were all mentioned as things the target audience would be interested in.'
I commented this on Rachels blog to offer constructive critisism. It also helps me improve my own work by looking at things others have done both good and bad. I can see things others have done wrong and learn from their mistakes, and also see what works well and maybe do this in my own work. It will also help the people whose work I commented on improve their own work next time they do it.
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